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Okay, What’s Next?

06 Tuesday Mar 2012

Posted by Ann in Advice, Ann, Experiences

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750 Words, freewriting, journal, scenes, telling stories, write it down

Do you have a scene in your head that you replay over and over? Most people have stories on the brain. Some of those stories are witty things we wish we’d told the rude person on the bus, and sometimes they are fantastical stories about dragons and knights. Whatever the story in your head is, write it down.

Mike and I talked about this last week when we were reviewing his post on “Little Stories.” Originally, he just said to encourage the little stories and let them go. I told him that it would be better to suggest they write them down, even if they’re never going to “go anywhere.”

Why do that? Why not save the writing for the big “important” stories? Sometimes, your brain gets stuck on something. A scene, a chapter, a moment, a piece of dialogue, and it recycles it over and over.

Often, once you’ve written it down, your brain frees up to say “Okay, what’s next?”

This is where keeping a journal can come in handy. I have a 750words account that I’ve been writing in daily for some months now, and it’s full of little stories. Things I wish I could say to rude people, better ways to have explained a complicated situation, fictional moments with fictional characters that aren’t stories so much as a slice of life only interesting to me, and a lot more. Once I’ve written these things down, they are free. They exist outside of my brain, even if no one ever sees them. My brain says, “Okay, what’s next?”

How many people say, “Oh, I’ve got this story that’s been in my head for years. Maybe someday I’ll write it down.” Oftentimes, those stories are a small collection of scenes, but they keep replaying over and over, and feel like a huge, completed opus.

Start writing them down. Write down all of the complete and incomplete moments. Figure out what happens before and after that moment. Let your brain refill with another story. Don’t be afraid of “wasting time” or that you can only write the words that you someday are going to show to others. Don’t be afraid that if you write it down, nothing else will come—something will, even if not right away. Every word you write is practice, and every amount of practice moves you forward–maybe as you get better in prose, or you simply move out some stale thoughts from your brain so fresh new ones get in.

So try it out for a while–in a paper journal or an online journal or wherever you prefer. Write down those little stories in your head–those little snippets and moments and slices of life, and see what comes next.

Lists and Possibilities

24 Tuesday Jan 2012

Posted by Ann in Ann, Inspiration

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Breakout Novel, Donald Maass, freewriting, getting past writer's block, imagination, making lists, overcoming barriers, possibilities

“I daresay you haven’t had much practice,” said the Queen. “When I was your age, I always did it for half-an-hour a day. Why, sometimes I’ve believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast.” -Through the Looking Glass by Lewis Carroll

We use lists all the time–to-do lists, shopping lists, bucket lists, etc. But what about lists as a set of possibilities for your story?

When I’m feeling stuck on a certain situation or character in my story, I oftentimes just start rapid-fire listing all the possibilities I can come up with. All of them–good and bad, serious and silly–and seeing which strikes me the most.

For example, if I’ve created an event in a story, but I’m still not sure who is responsible for it, I might start by listing potential suspects. (I’m notorious for coming up with problems before I assign people to cause them.) Or, in reverse, I have this cool antagonist group, but I’m not sure what to do with them, I might start listing ideas about them–their wants, their motivations, their fears….

Perhaps I’ll do a list for my protagonist, too. If I later compare those lists, I might find intersecting points in which their interests cross or conflict, which will be the impetus for a story to happen. This might even happen between two protagonists and two antagonists, depending on the depth of your story’s characters.

Listing can also be used for plot points–simply writing out all the scene or moment ideas you have and figuring out how or if they fit into the overall story you want to tell. One exercise in the Donald Maass Breakout Novel series (which I highly recommend) has you listing out the stakes of a story, and then, when you think you’ve thought of all the ways the situation can get worse, to list out even more things. And when you think it can’t get any worse, think of even more things that will make it worse. It’s quite the exercise, and I’ve applied it to other parts of my storytelling as well.

There are a hundred ways you can use lists for your writing–but I think one of the most important things to remember is that you don’t have to keep anything on your list. It’s an exercise, not a contract set in stone. By using lists and whipping out ideas in short form as fast as you can come up with them, you’re able to exhaust your possibilities and find the ones that work best or are the most exciting among those that might be bland, predictable, or otherwise undesirable.

When you are listing, I suggest free-forming it. Don’t bother with what kind of numbering or lettering or which bullet-points you should use (unless that will help spark your creativity). Possibilities might be as serious as the death of a protagonist’s loved one to as whimsical as unicorn farts. All that matters is that you exhaust your ideas, and when you think you’re done, come up with even more. Anything. Everything.

Ideas are a dime a dozen and we’re under no obligation to use every idea that flits across our imagination (I suspect even the most prolific of storytellers would have trouble doing this). For all of the awesome ideas we have, we usually have had a thousand zip by. But sometimes all those extras come in as noise that block us from hearing another possibility (or they might even belong in a different story). Use your lists to get everything out–the good, the bad, the irrelevant–and then keep only the ideas that really sing for the story at hand.

And don’t censor yourself–you’re the only one who is ever going to see it, and sometimes our best ideas are the ones we’re afraid to write down. That might not be the case every time, but you’ll never know if you don’t try it, right?

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